Sunday, January 16, 2011

Microfiction Monday - Jumbo Hangover



Welcome to Microfiction Monday.


                                   Where a picture paints 140 characters.

Susan over at Stonyriver (http://www.stonyriver.ie/ ) hosts Microfiction Monday The rules are simple,to use Susan's picture she posts then compose a story up to 140 characters including spaces and punctuation.

This is this weeks picture and my story to go with.




Marla had it with her dead-beat husband, Al.


“I told you not to order the jumbo juicy froo-froo island cocktail. Now get up before I slice that hangover right outta you!”

25 comments:

  1. That'll teach Al... he'll never order that jumbo juicy froo-froo island cocktail again!

    Clever take on this week's pic, Fay!

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  2. Hehe. Nice one. Have a great week.

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  3. Bet Al pays attention next time!! Enjoy your week, Fay!

    Sylvia

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  4. I think we found our next "Real Housewives" contestant.... :O)

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  5. Al better watch out, Maria sounds determined!
    Nice!

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  6. That would make a great beach drink here. Jumbo juicy froo-froo island cocktail. With lotsa tequila!!! Very good as usual.

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  7. Funny microfiction. Thanks for stopping by my Sunday 160. Give it a go. You might like it.

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  8. Had to be very jumbo to have an umbrella that big. LOL
    And thanks, by the way!
    -- K

    Kay, Alberta, Canada
    An Unfittie's Guide to Adventurous Travel

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  9. Al deserves it! :) That froo-froo cocktail, and now, the admonition too.. heheh

    Now that's a fun piece of fiction :))

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  10. There's an original way to cure a hangover!! Funny!
    :)

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  11. You know, poking a hole in him might lower is blood-alcohol content. Of course, it will lower his blood content all together, but hey, not all solutions are perfect.

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  12. I could use a Cocktail like that!

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  13. Hysterical. That was a drink he should have shared with friends!

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  14. He does look kind of hungover! lol I agree with Jayne, he should have shared!

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  15. You are what you eat, am I right? LOL!

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  16. oh my goodness, if that's a friend, who needs enemies, lol.

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  17. Marla is not a woman to be argued with - scary! LOL!!

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  18. Very original - I was wondering where the parasol came from and now I know!

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  19. oh! I want to try one of those!! :)

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  20. Ooo Marla is a woman to be reckoned with

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  21. LOL I love a woman of action! Nice MF -- you made me laugh. I took a look around and like what I see. You followed me and I'm following you right back. :) Congratulations, by the way, on your impending Nana-hood. I'm envious. All my grandkids are furry and walk on four paws. *sigh* One of these days I'll get one with opposable thumbs.

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  22. Must have been quite a HUGE cocktail with an umbrella that size. Very funny.

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