Monday, December 20, 2010

I've had better days

Two more haiku




She came for healing
Why to me, I am not whole
She died on Friday













Look. Loud bright smiling
Hear.  Crystal quiet unsure
Know. She is not known.

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6 comments:

  1. AnonymousDecember 20, 2010 at 10:26 PM

    Both strong. Both leave some emptiness as I go.

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  2. DasuntouchaDecember 21, 2010 at 1:15 AM

    ...She came for healing
    Why to me, I am not whole
    She died on Friday    ...

    ...man this one tears at the heart strings...felt.

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  3. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallDecember 21, 2010 at 2:39 AM

    Sad..
    well said..

    powerful writing, thanks for sharing..

    A+

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  4. AnonymousDecember 21, 2010 at 6:52 AM

    That first one was so sad. Powerfully written.


    http://jessicasjapes.wordpress.com/2010/12/20/one-second/

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  5. BBDecember 21, 2010 at 9:08 AM

    You are talented and funny!

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  6. AnonymousDecember 21, 2010 at 1:07 PM

    lovely but sad? mines here- http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/01/23/painted-hallways/

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