Welcome to Microfiction Monday.
Where a picture paints 140 characters.
Susan over at Stonyriver (http://www.stonyriver.ie/ ) hosts Microfiction Monday The rules are simple,to use Susan's picture she posts then compose a story up to 140 characters including spaces and punctuation.
This is this weeks picture and my story to go with.
Marla had it with her dead-beat husband, Al.
“I told you not to order the jumbo juicy froo-froo island cocktail. Now get up before I slice that hangover right outta you!”
That'll teach Al... he'll never order that jumbo juicy froo-froo island cocktail again!
ReplyDeleteClever take on this week's pic, Fay!
Hehe. Nice one. Have a great week.
ReplyDeleteBet Al pays attention next time!! Enjoy your week, Fay!
ReplyDeleteSylvia
I think we found our next "Real Housewives" contestant.... :O)
ReplyDeleteAl better watch out, Maria sounds determined!
ReplyDeleteNice!
That would make a great beach drink here. Jumbo juicy froo-froo island cocktail. With lotsa tequila!!! Very good as usual.
ReplyDeleteFunny microfiction. Thanks for stopping by my Sunday 160. Give it a go. You might like it.
ReplyDeleteHad to be very jumbo to have an umbrella that big. LOL
ReplyDeleteAnd thanks, by the way!
-- K
Kay, Alberta, Canada
An Unfittie's Guide to Adventurous Travel
Al deserves it! :) That froo-froo cocktail, and now, the admonition too.. heheh
ReplyDeleteNow that's a fun piece of fiction :))
There's an original way to cure a hangover!! Funny!
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You know, poking a hole in him might lower is blood-alcohol content. Of course, it will lower his blood content all together, but hey, not all solutions are perfect.
ReplyDeleteI could use a Cocktail like that!
ReplyDeleteHysterical. That was a drink he should have shared with friends!
ReplyDeleteHe does look kind of hungover! lol I agree with Jayne, he should have shared!
ReplyDeleteYou are what you eat, am I right? LOL!
ReplyDeleteoh my goodness, if that's a friend, who needs enemies, lol.
ReplyDeleteMarla is not a woman to be argued with - scary! LOL!!
ReplyDeleteVery original - I was wondering where the parasol came from and now I know!
ReplyDeleteoh! I want to try one of those!! :)
ReplyDeletehahahaha! You crack me up!
ReplyDeletehahahahaha!
ReplyDeleteOoo Marla is a woman to be reckoned with
ReplyDeleteLOL I love a woman of action! Nice MF -- you made me laugh. I took a look around and like what I see. You followed me and I'm following you right back. :) Congratulations, by the way, on your impending Nana-hood. I'm envious. All my grandkids are furry and walk on four paws. *sigh* One of these days I'll get one with opposable thumbs.
ReplyDeleteMust have been quite a HUGE cocktail with an umbrella that size. Very funny.
ReplyDeleteHmm... some hangover!
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